A new beta reader this time was Christine Morgan, a fine author in her own right, whose feel for action scenes and dialogue is keen and exacting she offered many improvements.Ĭertain fact checking, answering of technical questions, and general encouragement was generously provided by coteries of the knowledgeable and charming, within both the academic and horror communities – Jerrod Balzer, Mike Brendan, Brian Brown, Phil Cary, Teresa Delgado, John Goodrich, Karen Koehler, Michele Lee, Michelle McCrary, Bryon Morrigan, Mark Orr, Elena Procario-Foley, Paul Puglisi, Rich Ristow, Mark Samuels, John Urbancik, and Doug Warrick. Once again, my primary beta reader has been Robert Kennedy, who never failed to give prompt and detailed comments on each chapter as I progressed. Published by Permuted Press at Smashwords.ġ274 - Sees Beatrice Portinari for the first timeġ283 - Marries Gemma Donati they have four childrenġ289 - Fights in the Battle of Campaldinoġ292 - Begins writing The New Life (La Vita Nuova)ġ295 - Joins the guild of apothecaries and becomes active in Florentine politicsġ302 - Banished from Florence sentenced to being burned alive should he return
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